Comments : Don't Come Back

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Now this is a powerful piece of emotions and heartfelt words.

    The simplistic rhyme scheme is the perfect touch for the message you are expressing. Just powerful!!!

    true from the heart- words that need to be expressed have flowed into a wonderful poem in my opinion!

    thank you for sharing!

    • 8 years ago

      by shadow

      Thank you Maple Tree for the kind words :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is great. Really has depth of emotion and about how you won't make the same mistake again and refuse to be hurt like that again.

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    I really liked this a lot-you are taking back your power by not allowing this person back into it. Good for you! It's not easy to not fallback into old habits or old relationship that are harmful to us. Take care-