Comments : I Will Be Your Rock

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Glenn, this is a sad yet emotion filled piece that turns out lovely in the end.

    Many of us can relate about being hurt time and again and I feel moving on is the difficult part which it seems this lady did then got hurt again and is finding it hard to trust because of the hurtful past. (whether true or not)

    You once fell in love
    With a boy you gave your hand
    He made you a woman
    But then he ran
    ^^
    Falling in love once is hard especially when with the wrong person but to be treated like an object whether man or woman is hurtful. The made you a woman line I'm not sure if it means marrying her or just having his way then legging it lol either way sad.

    You fell in love again
    And at the alter I saw the two of you stand
    But the vows that were made
    Washed away like sand
    ^^
    Now with this I see the woman /man made a mistake maybe even married too early resulting in a break up of the marriage. I like the imagery of vows washing away like sand.

    I ask you to trust me and love again
    For I love you and always have
    We will walk down the aisle
    Gazing at each others smile
    This time I will not break your heart
    Or bring you any sorrows
    I will be your rock and foundation
    For you to build all your tomorrow's
    ^^
    I love this ending asking her to trust again because she is hurt and it will take time for her to trust again with anyone but i sense with you sayin you won't break her heart again that you was either love one or two. Maybe I am wrong.

    All in all great write.

    Em