Comments : Our Geography

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Melissa,

    A soft, beautifully descriptive and sensual piece here that reads beautifully.

    "No, it was the fissure at the nape of my spine that let you in."

    ^^^^^

    Love that line and I love your use of metaphor throughout this piece.

    Well done on another great poem.
    All the best,
    Ben

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Michael

    Love this Melissa

    Much love
    Michael :)x

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Free verse

    Well penned, Melissa and good use of metaphors