Hello Larry.

I love reading your work. You have a wonderful and practiced way with words where nothing is wasted and you have created four delicate, descriptive stanzas here that are both moving and romantic all at once.
I also love your complete lack of punctuation; I know that isn't an uncommon trait, but it so different from the way I ever sit down and write that it strikes me and opens my eyes to how much better it allows a poem to flow in some cases. This one especially, as it is soft and melodic in its reading and hard full stops, juttering commas etc would only detract from the flow.

A lovely write, Larry, and one I read three times! You fully deserve the last of my nominations with this!

All the best,
Ben

Love the flow in this, Larry! Beautiful work. That idea of wanting to keep your love safe, and how much you mean to this person...

Just beautiful!

I like the tone of this write, there is warmth and there is truth. No fancy words or over the roof sort of thing but an honest tender and heartfelt write for the one you love.

The smooth flow makes it an effortless read and what I like the most about it is that you have associated each aspect of nature to your love..nicely written.

Beautiful write.

Interesting.

That surround you every moment

^should this be "surround your every moment"

thoroughly enjoyed this and one could feel the passion in your heart