Comments : 3 Poems

  • 2 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is stunning Mark. All of your poetry is great, but I love how this one managed to have such an impact while still being short. You really have mastered your craft haven't you? I mean, you found the balance between long, lengthy gloriously descriptive writes and the quick punch in the gut (or wherever) ones.

    Anyway, I've read this one like 5 times and it's fantastic.

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is short with so much power. Many things can be said with a few words. I Love short poetry and this is awesome. Add to my fav. Take care

  • 2 years ago

    by Mayday

    I Like it! :D


  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard


    Your descriptive writing really is second to none on this site. You have a way with words that is truly mesmerising and an absolute pleasure to read.

    Beautifully done.


    • 1 year ago

      by Purvi Gadia

      I completely agree. Aren't his sdescriptions just mesmerizing...