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by Narph Feb 17, 2016
i'll still remember the thumbprint
pressing steadily at the furrow above my eyes
"there's a star on your forehead"
don't wrinkle it.
Although this was short it was very captivating just like the image you are trying to paint. Some memories can leave an imprint on your mind and heart forever
Amazing what a few beautifully constructed words can convey, A moment, an action, such an emotive piece Narph
I second what Noura said. Don't post these too quickly so we can have a chance to nominate them all lol.
Narph, like, I can only vote three times a week, so stop posting TOO MANY POEMS IN ONE WEEK. That's my way of saying I really love your poetry.
It was one of Mel's poems, Birthed I think it was or something like that.
Yes, I know exactly what you mean by that - moments that will forever be ingrained in your heart that was probably just a passing comment by someone. I love those!