Comments : What she says

  • 1 year ago

    by Britt

    What beautiful imagery to show not worrying or stressing or even having fear. This is the second poem today I've read similar to this and it makes me wonder if my countenance isn't so great today. ;)

    • 1 year ago

      by Narph

      What was the other poem, Britt? You know how everyone sort of has their own moment? Or how there are these instances in life that happen and there's something about them and you feel so strongly that you need to remember this, specifically, forever. This was one of those moments, with my grandmother. Words of wisdom, but if I asked her about it she probably wouldn't remember saying it.

  • 1 year ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is absolutely beautiful! I can just picture this and I love that you share that this moment in your life was with you grandmother. Wow.

  • 1 year ago

    by Britt

    It was one of Mel's poems, Birthed I think it was or something like that.

    Yes, I know exactly what you mean by that - moments that will forever be ingrained in your heart that was probably just a passing comment by someone. I love those!

  • 1 year ago

    by Britt

    It was one of Mel's poems, Birthed I think it was or something like that.

    Yes, I know exactly what you mean by that - moments that will forever be ingrained in your heart that was probably just a passing comment by someone. I love those!

  • 1 year ago

    by nourayasmine

    Narph, like, I can only vote three times a week, so stop posting TOO MANY POEMS IN ONE WEEK. That's my way of saying I really love your poetry.

  • 1 year ago

    by silvershoes

    I second what Noura said. Don't post these too quickly so we can have a chance to nominate them all lol.

  • 1 year ago

    by Nicko

    Amazing what a few beautifully constructed words can convey, A moment, an action, such an emotive piece Narph
    Breathtaking....

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Although this was short it was very captivating just like the image you are trying to paint. Some memories can leave an imprint on your mind and heart forever