Comments : Touch of Paradise

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautiful little piece of poetry and great to see a new write from you.
    With everything you post, you get better and better. This is delicate and skilfully put together and a real pleasure to read.
    I am out of votes this week, but I promise I will not forget to nominate this piece come Monday!
    All the very best and I hope you are well,
    Ben.

    Ps. I think this would be better in the Nature category, but either way, this is lovely

    • 1 year ago

      by Shruti

      Thank you very much. I'm trying to write better.

  • 1 year ago

    by nancy

    Its one of da most beautiful poem u have ever written.

  • 1 year ago

    by DarkLight

    Hey Shruti.

    First let me say, am impressed.(it doesn't happen more often) with this beautiful piece.
    I really like the layout and the choice of words used.
    Worth the read.

  • 1 year ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    Good imagery.

  • 1 year ago

    by Everlasting

    A snowflake was what came to mind when I was reading this piece. I enjoyed it. Keep writing.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Shruti

    Well done on this win - much deserved!

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Shruti,

    Ben told me about your win and how impressed he was with your writing. I must admit I thought he may have been embellishing the facts. I can categorically say he was not. You should be rightly proud of your win this week.

    Well done you!

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by Darren

    Congrats on the win

    nice to see a nature poem win.

    • 1 year ago

      by Shruti

      Tons of thanks to everyone.
      Though did not expect, but am really glad.
      :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is a soft tenderness to this poem which makes the read effortless and at the same time gives that ahhh feeling. Nicely penned and congrats on the win :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    What a lovely visual poem it reminds me of snowflakes

  • 1 year ago

    by In love wid MRR

    Lovely piece... Well done!! 5/5

  • 1 year ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    What a talent!!! The poem's just beautiful. "Congo!" you won.

  • 1 year ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    What a talent!!! The poem's just beautiful. "Congo!" you won.

    • 1 year ago

      by Shruti

      Thank you everyone for reading my poem and commenting.
      Much appreciated.
      :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Such a magical piece

  • 1 year ago

    by nancy

    Congo for win although wishing u much late didn't have knowledge of this

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is just lovely. Breathtaking!!!

    • 3 months ago

      by Shruti

      Thank you. :)