I rate it a 5, but maybe you want to look through it once more for typos because it took me a second to understand what I was reading. Nice message though. :) Keep it up and if you wanna talk, my inbox is open.

Some spelling errors which is a shame but good rhyming and story with portrayal of emotion.

I like the suspense that you kept till the end which kept me glued to the poem all through the while.
A superb piece with negligible flaws hidden by the strong content.
Great work and keep penning