Narration

by Mark Rawlins   Mar 12, 2016


A man with an alsatian .... on Macclesfield station .... without a hesitation .... gave me a publication ....by way of invitation .... for me and my relation .... to join his celebration .... of God and his creation ....where we will find salvation .... and maybe liberation ....through this glorification .... of his imagination ....

After some consternation .... and much deliberation .... I noticed his frustration ....at my procrastination ....

A bead of perspiration .... betrayed his irritation .... but through determination .... and much intrepridation .... he cited a quotation ... for my edification .... 'Lead not into temptation .... or Hell fire and damnation .... will be your destination .... so join our congregation .... or give us a donation' ....

Avoiding altercation .... I patted his alsatian .... and went inside the station .... despite his protestation .... I bought myself a bacon (sandwich) .... and reached my destination ................. awaiting my damnation ....

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  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Creative write!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is different to the usual love story poem etc but excellent. I like what you did and how you had a bit of a twisted sense of humour. I am a non believer so it's something I'd do lol well written

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    I really like how you wrote this, it had a neat flow. Really good write.

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Very clever and wonderful to read. Really very enjoyable to read

  • 8 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Ha! Aside from the format ... And how it looks, this was a pleasure to read.

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