Comments : Atlas

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    This is a sweet piece.
    As long as you're right next to me,
    I will forever be...
    Happy.
    ^^
    That's what love is all about :)
    Em

  • 11 months ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    Sweet, amazing. Like your rhymes.

  • 11 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Fredy,

    I like this composition... The rhyming was unforced and while reading this I nod along and the bottom lines made me said: "uhhhhh.. so sweet"...

    As long as you promise my heart to mend.
    I'll promise you:
    If you carry the sky then I'll carry you"

    the weight dropped to the floor,
    The sky was falling, and I care no more.

    As long as you're right next to me,
    I will forever be...
    Happy.
    ^^
    favorite lines
    5/5

    Gel