THANKS FOR THE VOTE

I've enjoyed this piece,it's delicately beautiful.Somehow to me it seems as though you were speaking of those "things" we sometimes yearn for,only to realize later on that they're but vanity.Good work on this.

Michael, great work. It's very catchy with the rhyming. I believe that we all need a bit of fairy dust sprinkled on us by that special fairy, abit like cupids' arrow?

All the best, Em

"I think what drew me into this poem was its flow and roundness of the story. Using fairytales in love poems is not new but the melody of this poem breathed new life in it, also the repeating question of whether it would truly be considered a sin, just added more personality to the ever-old comparisons with fairytales. "