Comments : Dark dreams

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Triston and welcome to the site.

    A neat little first post from you here. These dreams sound more like nightmares! I have had those 'endless nights' that dreams seem to revel in and they really aren't much fun, are they?

    Congratulations on your first post and I look forward to reading more of your work.
    All the very best
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    Good first write.
    Enjoyed reading it.

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Well wriiten poem, great imagery and emotion. It's really nice when you find a short poem so obviously well thought out and with rhyme. Welcome to P&Q it's a great place to be. I've only been a member for a short time but found everyone to be friendly and inspiring. Take care and well done on your first submission. All best Milly

  • 7 years ago

    by LexiLove

    I like this poem it was well written as your first piece.
    It was wonderful

  • 7 years ago

    by No One

    Hey Triston,

    A haunting poetry for your first post.
    Welcome to PnQ. Hope to read more of your poems and quotes.

    xxx

  • 7 years ago

    by Lilith DevilHart

    Your a good poet keep writing more

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Triston,

    This is a good first poem. Welcome to p&q. I hope you continue to write and share your unique style with us.

    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by triston

    Thank you all for your kind comments

  • 7 years ago

    by triston

    They have been very uplifting

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Triston,

    I like the form and rhyme of this poem. It's theme though dark is presented well. Dark poetry is a theme many can relate to. I encourage you to write more and share your feelings.

    Take care,

    Michael