Comments : A Moment of Inspiration

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Inspiration pulsates charms the pen

    Great imagery, Meena. Lovely write.
    All the best
    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Meena, Love the imagery you paint in this piece.

    Beautiful how you write about writing a poem. The words come together beautifully.

    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    *Double post

  • 1 year ago

    by Everlasting

    Colorful emotions
    take flight,
    perched upon blue lines
    never to erase.

    ^ On this stanza, I may have read it incorrectly, but I feel it may sound better to say never to be erased?

    Or otherwise, never to erase, what?

    Or I may need to come back and re-read the poem other day.

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved the imagery of the creative mind unable to sleep because of all of the ideas
    Chasing the images and letting inspiration
    charm the pen. A creative insight into the workings of a poet very well portrayed
    Milly

  • 1 year ago

    by GB

    You described the state very well, Meena. the silence of the night prepares the mind to write fluently and comfortably, away from the burdens of the day. This is really beautiful, neat verse.

  • 1 year ago

    by Rsan

    Just fantastic..

  • 1 year ago

    by William Mae

    Beautiful, a thought can spark so much, it can take you many places and then bring readers there later to view your picture.

  • 1 year ago

    by William Mae

    Beautiful, a thought can spark so much, it can take you many places and then bring readers there later to view your picture.

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Meena,

    funny how I stumbled upon this after commenting on a recent thread.

    Describing the process of muse; from concept through to the writing.

    Nicely laid out in an almost step by step 'this is how it works for me' kind of way.

    Well done,

    Take care,

    Michael