Comments : Labyrinth

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is a really good write.. Such thoughts go around everybody's head at night time I think as it's he most time people analyse their life and if they are doing the right thing by themselves and if they are parents their children. I for one do.

    Their is a lot of emotion in this piece and I can see it's come from the heart you have had quite a bit to deal with and it plays on your mind. I hope getting it out has helped.

    The only thing is in stanza 5 you write
    'Are the my angles calling' I feel it should be just 'me' here.

    Tale care, Em.