This is very personal and I admire your strenght for posting. When life knocks us down and crashes our self-esteem we do become extremely vulnerable. Nobody likes rejection, it hurts but you will bounce back stronger than ever and you will get it right. Never give up hope. You do have people by your side who do believe in you. Thank you for sharing. All the very best.
2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
This is a very powerful post from you. I love the short, sharp sentences that you employ throughout this piece - they really hit hard when reading and enforce the point you are trying to make, right from the start.
Keep writing as this is great stuff.
Stay well and all the best
2 years ago
This is very powerful and shows that when things knock us down it can be hard to get back up but things aren't always hard. Remember there is a rainbow after the stir. As they say.
This is written well, take care.
This poem has a sort of rap/slam/rant feel to it. It's very honest and straight to the point...like you're laying it all out there and I love that aspect...like your saying..."hey this is me...accept it or get over it...your choice". I guess I'm saying...it has 'attitude' and I like that...yeah...I do like that :)