Comments : The Scapegoat

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    Each poem you write Ki, gets stronger, and powerful....

    You are starting to fly within your writings and open up that darkness within....

    I am so proud of you and this poem is very personal... so Im just going to end here by saying, YOU GO GIRL!

    as your friend, I dont think anyone is more proud of you than I am... this piece is beyond powerful!

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Wow! This is amazing! Such a powerful write, I'm totally blown away-just beautiful!

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is very personal and I admire your strenght for posting. When life knocks us down and crashes our self-esteem we do become extremely vulnerable. Nobody likes rejection, it hurts but you will bounce back stronger than ever and you will get it right. Never give up hope. You do have people by your side who do believe in you. Thank you for sharing. All the very best.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Kireasha

    This is a very powerful post from you. I love the short, sharp sentences that you employ throughout this piece - they really hit hard when reading and enforce the point you are trying to make, right from the start.

    Keep writing as this is great stuff.

    Stay well and all the best
    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Kireasha,
    This is very powerful and shows that when things knock us down it can be hard to get back up but things aren't always hard. Remember there is a rainbow after the stir. As they say.
    This is written well, take care.

    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by Hellon

    This poem has a sort of rap/slam/rant feel to it. It's very honest and straight to the point...like you're laying it all out there and I love that aspect...like your saying..."hey this is me...accept it or get over it...your choice". I guess I'm saying...it has 'attitude' and I like that...yeah...I do like that :)