Comments : Demons

  • 1 year ago

    by Mayday

    Yikes! D:

    Wow, that was ...o_o

    5/5 !

    Like very easy to identify with... I really liked this, Em - excellent writing ^_^

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    So well described. I don't think either that a tortured soul gets old. The chances are it will get weaker and eventually may die due to exhaustion. Love the style and it fits the topic. Excellent written. All the best

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Em, I really liked this a lot-I don't think I would change anything you wrote-loved the visual and your descriptives of what happens to a tortured soul-hugs-Brenda

  • 1 year ago

    by ELI A SHAME OF MISERY

    I can relate to this very much , not much but the few words said it all , I really like it
    , and would like to see you expand