Comments : Dandelion Child

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is kinda sad but written with great beauty. Enjoyed reading. Take care

    • 1 year ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you for reading and commenting, it is very appreciated. I agree that it is kind of sad, melancholy is probably the main emotion guiding my writing in this piece. In a way, it's all a metaphor of something I was forced to witness, and an attempt to come to understand its meaning.

  • 1 year ago

    by Rsan

    This here is just beautiful..Sad..but beautiful.. More especially with the image, it conjures perhaps a tragic tale which she had been longing for quite a long time.Excellent piece
    Rsan

  • 1 year ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Sad and amazing all at once, I must have read this for or five times...its just one of those writes where you have to.

    You have an amazing control over words.

    • 1 year ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you so much for your kind words, and thank you for reading. I love this one too myself, it's one of my writes that have absolutely been planned, and written with a very specific and detailed scene and story in mind from the very start. I love how it ended up working according to the vision I had!

  • 1 year ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Really, it is amazing thankyou for sharing.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    This is just so beautiful! It tells so much and obviously it has a very deep meaning to you-I just love it! Well done-

    • 1 year ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you for reading and writing such kind words. I absolutely love that this piece has gotten some attention now, because I was sad at it being unnoticed when I first published it. <3