Comments : On Haunted Trails

  • 1 year ago

    by Everlasting

    Haunting atmosphere. I could picture the evening walks. I almost felt like I was there. Enjoyed the read.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I read and rated this the other day and meant to come back to it.

    This is an exquisite and delicate piece of poetry that I have enjoyed reading four or five times now - the flow, the imagery and everything about it is wonderful. It is exactly the sort of poem I wish I had written!

    Good luck in the weekly and all the very best,
    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Maher

    Very nice sir. It's dark and I can feel the chill from the atmosphere this piece creates. I can hear a slowly plucked background from a Resonator fitting this pretty well.

    Thank you for sharing :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Really enjoyed your poem. I could imagine taking that walk at night quite clearly. That cold feeling when you wonder if its just a breeze or a spirit still walking there. To walk through history at night is quite unlike
    any daytime walk. Well captured
    All the best Milly xx

  • 1 year ago

    by Poetess

    Love the atmosphere you created.

  • 1 year ago

    by Meth

    It pulled me into every scene...

  • 1 year ago

    by Poetess

    Congrats on the win!

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on your win - Milly x

  • 1 year ago

    by Rsan

    An excellent and heart wrenching piece though you could have given the title from that last line..Then again I'm just tossing coin

    Nice work

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Beautiful write-spooky but graceful in it's words-congratulations on your win!

  • 1 year ago

    by Louis A Ranero

    Beautiful flow!

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judge Comment:

    Night Flyer talks of spirits and haunted trails with such a tasteful and beautiful way..

    Very creative and heart warming.
    Beautiful rhyme by this gentleman... what a beautiful piece!