We all need someone

by Em   Apr 17, 2016


Hardships were a plenty I'd stopped loving deep down
as I'd suffered with a broken heart.
The aching in it grew and grew..

Searching for something but I didn't know what
until I met you, you made my heart race;
my body did things it hadn't done before.
It needed you, yearned for you to be near it but
those times where I'd been broken played tricks.

My head wanted more, my heart said no,
I needed a lover but I needed to grow as a person.

Your witty charm, your purity made me need you more,
so I took the plunge and decided to fall in love.

Besides we all need to be with somebody.

Copyright:Em

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  • 1 year ago

    by Marvellous

    Failure comes, that we learn improve. Loneliness, is prison of time. You can never walk alone here. We all need that someone, to cheer.

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Definitely!

  • 1 year ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Em,

    I like this poem. It's well written and it flowed pretty nicely.

    so I took the plunge and decided to fall in love.
    ^ This line is well done. As it summaries the concept of the poem.

    The only thing that I did not like in this piece of work is the different number of lines in each stanzas. Maybe it's just my OCD :)

    But overall well done on this work! Keep it up.

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thanks Marc :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Chad Picard

    Hmm. Assuming this is based on an actual occurrence, I'm glad things are working out for you, Em.

    If it's just fantasy, then I hope it comes true for you. :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Thanks everyone

  • 1 year ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Penned!!!