Think I caught a typo "It needed you, year we for you to be near it but", did you mean to say 'yearn for you..'?
That aside, I like this poem, especially the last bit since you're making the choice to fall in love as opposed to it happening, it's interesting is a mature decision. I read somewhere recently, that elderly couples that have been together for a while, make the decision to fall in love everyday, that they learn to love, instead of expecting it to just happen. Sorry for the ramble, enjoyed this!
Beautifully written with a strong push from your heart and your emotions. I loved the wording, the description, and the way it was written out. I know someone who made me feel this way and it truly is the greatest feeling to love and be loved. I pray it works out for you and I want to thank you for sharing your feelings which were so raw, deep, and true within this piece.
Keep it up!
1 year ago
This is quite inspiring, if you ask me. You know what you want, even if your mind has convinced you that what you want is contrasting with what you need...but, maybe - just maybe, it's all really the same thing.
I think this is cute. Dive in, Give love a chance, be fearless - Great message and I'm happy for you ^_^
I really liked your poem to me it was
wonderful to see someone who has had
a difficult time, who had let their broken heart make them suffer for such a long time. Suddenly change their life around and make the decision to take control of their life and find the love that they realise they truly deserve.
I am a great believer in understanding first what you want to do and then working out what it is that you need to do to get it. I had a list as long as my arm about what my perfect love would look like. People said I would never find him because my list was so precise but I did find him and proved them wrong lol.
Keep well and keep writing your poetry is a pleasure to read.
When I look at older couples who have been married a lifetime to me that is amazing. It is a give and take and when the right person comes around our heart will let us know. Beautiful written. Take care