Comments : We all need someone

  • 1 year ago

    by hiraeth

    Think I caught a typo "It needed you, year we for you to be near it but", did you mean to say 'yearn for you..'?

    That aside, I like this poem, especially the last bit since you're making the choice to fall in love as opposed to it happening, it's interesting is a mature decision. I read somewhere recently, that elderly couples that have been together for a while, make the decision to fall in love everyday, that they learn to love, instead of expecting it to just happen. Sorry for the ramble, enjoyed this!

  • 1 year ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Beautifully written with a strong push from your heart and your emotions. I loved the wording, the description, and the way it was written out. I know someone who made me feel this way and it truly is the greatest feeling to love and be loved. I pray it works out for you and I want to thank you for sharing your feelings which were so raw, deep, and true within this piece.
    Keep it up!
    5/5

  • 1 year ago

    by Mayday

    This is quite inspiring, if you ask me. You know what you want, even if your mind has convinced you that what you want is contrasting with what you need...but, maybe - just maybe, it's all really the same thing.
    I think this is cute. Dive in, Give love a chance, be fearless - Great message and I'm happy for you ^_^

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Thank you for you lovely comments and taking your time, Em

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Hi Em,

    I really liked your poem to me it was
    wonderful to see someone who has had
    a difficult time, who had let their broken heart make them suffer for such a long time. Suddenly change their life around and make the decision to take control of their life and find the love that they realise they truly deserve.

    I am a great believer in understanding first what you want to do and then working out what it is that you need to do to get it. I had a list as long as my arm about what my perfect love would look like. People said I would never find him because my list was so precise but I did find him and proved them wrong lol.

    Keep well and keep writing your poetry is a pleasure to read.
    Milly xx

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    When I look at older couples who have been married a lifetime to me that is amazing. It is a give and take and when the right person comes around our heart will let us know. Beautiful written. Take care

  • 1 year ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Penned!!!

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Thanks everyone

  • 1 year ago

    by Chad Picard

    Hmm. Assuming this is based on an actual occurrence, I'm glad things are working out for you, Em.

    If it's just fantasy, then I hope it comes true for you. :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Em,

    I like this poem. It's well written and it flowed pretty nicely.

    so I took the plunge and decided to fall in love.
    ^ This line is well done. As it summaries the concept of the poem.

    The only thing that I did not like in this piece of work is the different number of lines in each stanzas. Maybe it's just my OCD :)

    But overall well done on this work! Keep it up.

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thanks Marc :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Marvellous

    Failure comes, that we learn improve. Loneliness, is prison of time. You can never walk alone here. We all need that someone, to cheer.

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Definitely!