Comments : Mosaic

  • 1 year ago

    by Lyn of philippines

    Very creative .

    the use of figure of speech was really nice.
    you deliver it in simplest way but still giving a wide imagery

    god bless.
    lyn

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Jason I think this is so beautiful. It may be a tad long but you keep the story going well throughout.

    The shattered panes
    Of glass in my heart,
    Fit together again
    As a beautiful mosaic.
    ^^
    I love this part. Beautiful.
    Em