Comments : Once again

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Ernest

    A well rhymed little poem here about love gone wrong. Sometimes, the best thing is to leave relationships like this behind as they are only destructive to both parties.
    I love the last couplet as it includes the word 'wretched' - I use that a lot in my poetry and no matter how hard I try, I can't stop using it - great word; says everything it has to.

    All the best,
    Ben