Comments : This Isn't Poetry

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    So glad I came across this one. The wording to me is beautiful, the flow is great, I love it. Take care

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Such an elegant piece.

    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by GB

    I just wish this poem was longer.Profound and breath-taking in every sense. I think poetry is the sum of all of these sensations.

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello,
    Lovely concept. Choosing to write inner feelings about another and as a result creating what others perceive as poetry.

    Excellent.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Congratulations - a well deserved win.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    This is just beautiful! I love your way of working your words to produce such a lovely poem. Congratulations on your win, well deserved!

  • 1 year ago

    by Darren

    Judges comment

    I fancied looking for something a little different this week. I found it in this piece.
    Love the conflicting title, this is very much poetry.
    Each stanza is an explosion of imagery from very few words.
    I love the second last stanza, confusing, non nonsensical but works.
    This was almost a 10 for me, but I have this thing for 'I'
    I would remove the last four, just a little repetitive for me.
    Think of that last line as just
    'Write you'
    7 points

  • 7 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Beautiful

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow... Loved it.

  • 1 month ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Beautifully written, bluejay. Well done