Comments : Proliferation.

  • 1 year ago

    by Britt

    Beautiful beautiful beautiful!!! One of my favorites. Nominated!

    I loved the soft tone with the even softer images. Seriously just beautiful!

  • 1 year ago

    by GB

    Such a proliferative and prosperous poem indeed MaryAnne~

    I think you used some of the most beautiful adjectives and could brilliantly paint memorable, vivid images within every line.
    The smoothness and the kind of serenity in this verse reminded of Charlotte Bronte's poetry, we must be creatures of light indeed to breathe wildflowers!

    Kudos :)

    • 1 year ago

      by Poet on the Piano

      Thanks so much Britt & Samia! Very grateful for your thoughts

  • 1 year ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    Absolutely breathtaking, hands down my favorite from the contest! I adore the native vibe, painted quite the lovely scene!

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A wonderfully strong visual poem of love one of the best I have seen for some time.

    Ravenous Mountains that look like ragged teeth. Story telling Meadows that have so many tales to tell of plants and flowers now long gone creatures that have walked their land living and dying there.

    The tribal voice of the wind - this stanza is b
    romantic, beautiful and erotic in a magical way.

    There is so much beauty and visual dynamics packed into your poem that if I was healthy I could probably write several pages on each and every line.

    Unfortunately I cant but what I would say that this is a poem that I would revisit time and time again and each time get more from it and I think the last two lines made a perfect ending and is very true. The light we give out will go with us everywhere

    The whole poem shouts of nature, history and love a wonderful write. Milly x

  • 1 year ago

    by cassie hughes

    This is absolutely gorgeous and deserved the contest win. The picture it paints is vividly wild and untamed yet contains a reverence and serenity that made my heart yearn to be outdoors. A truly lovely piece of writing. :)

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello

    A wonderful nature poem...

    Being out in the great outdoors is medicinal; it's what our very nature yearns for. A place where we can truly breathe and rid ourselves of the choking pollutants of city life.

    Well done, a nature poem that should be prescribed as daily medicine.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Absolutely beautiful write! Love the visuals -congratulations on your win, well deserved.

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Well done, I'm so glad to see this on the front page.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Well done on a very well deserved win. Millyx

  • 1 year ago

    by The Po whet

    Breathtaking is this amazing piece of art,sometimes I too get this question but I'd ask you too ,"how did you come up with something as beautiful as this,almost alive?"

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judge Comments:

    One of the TOP Nature poems written to date, this lady wrote such a pretty and elegant earthy poem. I was mesmerized from start to finish, just beautiful!