Comments : My Sonnet

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Olwin - brilliant! Love it and it made me laugh; you don't often see sonnets posted in the funny section!
    Honesty? Here goes: Syllables - spot on. Iambic pentameter - close and spot on throughout the majority of this piece; but Christ, it's a bugger :)

    Sorry I couldn't give you a prompt earlier - I had a rather disagreeable stomach - but you have done fine on your own!

    Take care

    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Olwin this really made me smile like a Cheshire cate because Ben is the sonnet master (my nickname) and because oi did a good job at a sonnet which are rarely found in this humour section.

    Take care, Em

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    Bravo Olwin!!! Loved the read and you have penned a warm heart-ed Sonnet which made me smile and also makes me want to write one too! Enjoyed it!!!

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Olson,

    Ben is right iambic pentameter is a bugger. I was reading a few examples of mine from years back. Your sonnet is hands down much better than my efforts.

    Well done, keep attempting them and one day you'll write a winner. Having said that Ben still needs to win with a sonnet. Lol

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Thanks for that, Michael, lol

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    I love this poem so much!!

    You did a wonderful job with this form and you also managed to make the reader giggle from start to finish!

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judge Comment:

    Ms. Dreamofolwin: Not only did you master the Sonnet form, you mastered the funny category and that is no easy task... first time I have read a funny sonnet and giggled from start to finish! This was a wonderful read!