I'm thrilled to find poets experimenting with the syntuit form.
You have a masterpiece here.
I would suggest one change for artistic purposes. If you drop "of" and move "love" to it's place, then the connector becomes implied:
That allows you to expand "it'll" to "it will" which seems, to me, a bit more elegant. This has the added advantage of completing the thought at line two before asserting the consequence in line three.