She wanted to soar high,
But unfortunately got grabbed by evils' hands.
She fluttered her wings so hard to break out,
For numerous months,
they ruthlessly kept on
unfeathering her and destroying her V.
They annihilated her all dreams and desires,
and lastly threw her in the lost world.
With the pain of the large balloon stomach;
She sobbed alone all night under the street-light.
She lost her mind;
As the dolor pushed her in black hole.
she went to sea shore,
laid herself and kept waiting
for the mighty waves to take her
away from this black world forever.
AB... This is a wonderful write. As Mr. Darcy points out... Rape is a heavy topic to write about and I loved how the story was told... It's not conversational nor narrative more of highlighted the devastating effects of what was done. A great write here.
I like writers that push the boundaries and explore new areas. This poem tells a sad story in a way that visually enhances it, to my mind anyway.
Rape is hard enough to write about, but you've managed to describe it in such a way that the reader feels her physical and emotional pain. The suicidal ending is just like the slide down to a dark abyss.