Comments : Tormented castaway

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Em,

    such a sad poem about feeling lonely, about feeling undeserving of love. Everyone deserves love - everyone!

    A well thought out rhyming poem - feeling like a castaway in a country full of people. Its true loneliness can be so powerful that in a room full of people one can feel alone!

    Well done Em and take care,

    Michael

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thanks Michael :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Em, such a beautiful sad write-I know you were being true to yourself when you wrote this. You are not undeserving of love, we all have had stuff we've done in our past or had done to us to make us feel less than worthy. You are special by just being you-I try not to get too religious but God has a plan for all of us even if we feel undeserving to even breath the air of the person next to us. Hugs and prayers-Brenda

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thanks Brenda :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Hello Em, everybody deserves to be loved and without love what is there left. Being alone is one thing but lonely is something far different. Nobody is perfect we all have made some mistakes but I am a firm believer that God will bring blessings along your way and he has a plan for each and one of us. Take care and all the best (hugs).

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thanks Dagmar :)