Comments : I probably said too much (rejigged)

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Em, just lovely! Secret loves...my curiosity is piqued...

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thanks Brenda for your comments.

  • 1 year ago

    by Phil Laws

    I like how you flow through details that aren't the same things that are often said. The only thing I can't empathize with is fearing the end. I find that even cycles don't repeat as much when you stop expecting them to. It's best to enjoy the ride without thinking a crash into happening.

    -EDIT- I guess I misunderstood your meaning in a few lines. I like this version better. The new lines are clearer and seem to fit the thrust of the rest more cohesively.

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Rejigged hope you get my meaning now.

  • 1 year ago

    by The Po whet

    Lovely write Em, good to know you're finding that feeling of loving again.

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      :)