Thank u Em for your very nice comment. I'm new @ this. I just joined Twitter & was trying to post it on that sight, not too sure what I just did. I thought if I can forgive this person, then I might be able to move on w/my life & not let him have so much control anymore. It's not good to hold things in that have effected someone's life as this did mine... & u know what, I think it did help somewhat. Baby steps-right? Who sang that song: "What doesn't kill us, makes us stronger"? how very true that song is. U have a great day Em
U are a good person. you didnt deserve what happened. god has plans for you thats why he kept you with us. dont ever give up. we all appriate what you do for people.careing n supportive. thank you for being a great friend elaine
This is a story well told and well written with a nice sprinkling of rhyme throughout.
All i would suggest is maybe breaking it up into separate stanzas to make it easier on the reader's eye. Some people see a big block and give up without trying.
Up to you and either way this is great stuff.