Comments : 6's & 7's

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    This a fantastic rhyming poem full of superb and thought out metaphors.

    Well done and take care,

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I agree with everything Michael (Mr Darcy) says.
    I write a lot of rhyming poetry but get so caught up with getting the rhyme as close to perfect as I can that the content or figurative language often suffers.

    Great piece,

    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    This is really an interesting write, very good. Almost makes me think of a heroin shoot experience, I may be way off on this, just made me think it was headed that way. I really liked the entire style of this-