Comments : Justifying my vices part 1

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Wow. I love this as always you excel yourself.

    By now I am starting to think
    that having a boiling desire for
    things that are already taken
    is an inherited trait..
    ^^
    I like the start of this and having read most your works and other posts feel it is personal and about possibly loving someone who is already taken and it's relatable to me as I have been here many times. Falling for someone already taken unfortunately. We most probably have all done this without knowing.

    I was conceived by
    cheating anyways,
    to say I'm against it
    would be self hate
    ^^
    This is a personal ending to you and Can be related to also. My dad ended up having an affair when I was young and got the lady pregnant and he blames me (though I was too young to be at fault) for his infidelity so I kind of feel your pain though sort of different circumstances.

    Great, emotional write.
    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Fascinating write! Short but extremely thought-provoking! I honestly don't have much to say aside from the fact that I am pleasantly surprised as I had never read anything by you before!

    Thanks for the great write,
    5/5
    IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 7 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Where focus is lost, strife is gained. Where there is truth, freedom resides.