Comments : Swept, By Your Rapture!!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Robert, as always this is beautiful. We should all feel a love like this so enchanting and beautiful and especially true.
    Love the structure and your use of words. Very unique.

    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by GB

    Well, is is a total submission!
    I think you followed a very difficult rhyme scheme here, lovely job, Robert.

    • 7 years ago

      by Robert Gardiner

      Thanks GB. The rhyme scheme was organic (created from the write). i just wrote, than after writing looked at the rhyme scheme.

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Robert, very beautiful poem.
    I wish we could all feel as loved as the above.
    I look forward to reading more of your work.

    D.D xx