Something that I am not really into (but deep down I am) is when I'm thrown a lot of images and big terms because my brain doesn't know how to process them at first read. I'm usually attracted into complicated simple poems rather than simply complicated poems. ( I think a few of your poems are complicated at first read lol nothing wrong with that though.) However, I enjoy reading them even when I don't understand them. They have a smooth transition between one part of the poem to the other. Though, sometimes... I get the feeling like there's more to the poem than what I am really reading
Can't explain myself.
Oh on this part, the part where you are contemplating and reached a conclusion "Poetry is suffering"
I have to disagree... I don't think poetry is suffering but rather that poetry could be a product of some type of suffering. Yet If I continue reading... I feel I may understand why the Narator thinks of it that way.
Other than that... Enjoyed the read like always. I may or may not, (can't promise) but I may come back to read this one. There are more terms that I need to find a definition for.
The piece of music you provided at the bottom is just fantastic, I couldn't fully relate it to the beautiful verse but I know very well how far we can go when music inspires us.
Mixing English and French was more than harmonic, smooth and elegant.
Thank you so much for sharing
Okay, I have read the whole thing 4 times now. Is it a work of art or a ramble from a madman? I don't know. I love the non-title. I love the pace of the whole thing and the tone used is brilliant. Do I understand it?
No, not even now. Did I enjoy reading it?
Very much so and that is why it is worth 4 points.