Comments : Cursed Sands

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Maher, a very deep /dark piece here. Lots of descriptive imagery and emotion as always and enthralling write by you.

    I was going to go into detail and separate each stanza but feel the piece is very delicate and personal to you plus too good.

    Take care, Em

    • 1 year ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Em, as always. Feel free to pull it apart if you like, it's always interesting to see the interpretation of others :)

  • 1 year ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I agree with Em, this sounds like it's the beginning to an interesting story. Shall there be a part two?

    5/5
    IdTakeABulletForYou

    • 1 year ago

      by Maher

      Thank you sir. Honestly, I intended it to be left open ended, but I might consider a part 2 if Em and yourself think it deserves one :)

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Wow =) i cant wait if there is a part 2.. well done :)

    • 1 year ago

      by Maher

      Lol thank ya ma'am, I'll try to make it :)

  • 1 year ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    The masses have spoken. Let there be a part two!

    • 1 year ago

      by Maher

      Haha I'll see if I can come up with anything. Thank you sir :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Definitely part 2 :)