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Maher, a very deep /dark piece here. Lots of descriptive imagery and emotion as always and enthralling write by you.
I was going to go into detail and separate each stanza but feel the piece is very delicate and personal to you plus too good.
Take care, Em
Thank you Em, as always. Feel free to pull it apart if you like, it's always interesting to see the interpretation of others :)
I agree with Em, this sounds like it's the beginning to an interesting story. Shall there be a part two?5/5
Thank you sir. Honestly, I intended it to be left open ended, but I might consider a part 2 if Em and yourself think it deserves one :)
Wow =) i cant wait if there is a part 2.. well done :)
Lol thank ya ma'am, I'll try to make it :)
The masses have spoken. Let there be a part two!
Haha I'll see if I can come up with anything. Thank you sir :)
Definitely part 2 :)