Starting over

by Em   Jun 13, 2016


I know we haven't known each other long
but our bond, I feel it's very strong..
You say that you love me, well;
I love you too, can you tell?

I think about holding you, being near you;
showing you that I am ready to start anew.
Life had no purpose before...
now, I'm learning to live that little bit more.

With you in my life I know I'm protected;
no longer do I feel disheartened or rejected.

Copyright: Em

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  • 1 year ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nicely written poem.

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thank you

  • 1 year ago

    by Marvellous

    The reason for living, is Love. The best gospel preached is Love shown. Hoping this gem, fulfills your dream. It can only get better here!

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thanks Marv

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Thank you as always for your wonderful comment.

  • 1 year ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Heh, you're so sweet writing poems about me. *gushes and blushes* JK ;) I thought this piece was adorable, and it definitely is effective in representing a new romantic vigor in your life.

    The only correction I would offer up would be "I feel is very strong. " would make more grammatical sense if it said "I feel it's very strong.", whatwith the comma before and all.

    Re-reading this poem, I actually got the chills... a bit of a realization of what love really is, versus what people say it's supposed to be. The line that gave me the chills was: "now, I'm learning to live that little bit more." The reason why is because we often mistake love for being that emotion, that happiness when we're with someone. Love, in reality, is in the people we live for. Sometimes, when we're all alone and sad about life, we forget to live.

    The ones we love will remind us to live that little bit more.

    Beautiful and even better a second time around.

    Much love,
    5/5
    IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Em
    I love this piece. short sweet and full of love.
    Lucky man/woman whoever it is.

    beautiful.

    • 1 year ago

      by Em

      Thanks Naomi xx