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by Marvellous Jun 18, 2016
Life, society /
Arena of much sure prizes
Like it turns out with surprises
Blazing headlines as shop prices
Amazing, how bishop rises
Three years after teen appearance
Clocked, with nine years of endurance
Drilled on rhymes and dimes tolerance
Learning truth that wakes relevance
Back in the days Life was frightening
Took to pen than sword of lightening
Sure lens to see a world fighting
Refugee camp, we call Writing
Addicted to observation
Fair strength in code generation
Drawn to music composition
Poems and quotes, likewise equation
Expect nothing than the obvious
Good to go with minds truth-conscious
Who in mercy, weigh their options
Controversy, called Marvellous.
by PETER EDWARDS
Some clever rhyming here!
The last line is such a triumph. It's about what we need, not what we want. This realisation makes all the difference and it's marvellous indeed :)
Well done on an amazing piece Marvelous!
I enjoyed this from start to finish!
by Ben Pickard
Wonderful write with unforced rhyming throughout.
Well done and all the best,