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Well done, I really liked this a lot.
by Ben Pickard
Wonderful write with unforced rhyming throughout.
Well done and all the best,
Well done on an amazing piece Marvelous!
I enjoyed this from start to finish!
The last line is such a triumph. It's about what we need, not what we want. This realisation makes all the difference and it's marvellous indeed :)
by PETER EDWARDS
Some clever rhyming here!