Hello Judy

A great piece here that is well laid out and kept me reading (often with amusement, eg, the chocolate stanza!)
I don't know, it seems you women really do need an awful lot at times....lol :) In fairness, though, men don't always give you guys those things, do we?

Well done and well rhymed too.

Take care and all the best
Ben

Judy I really feel this could be in the funny section as it made me chuckle in parts.

I'll even break you of a piece,
climb in and make my day.
^^
The only quarm is with this part as it doesn't seem to go with the rest of the stanza it's linked with.

Great rhyming and piece altogether though.
Em