Comments : Trust

  • 1 year ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I have a quote somewhere in my repertoire that says, "I would give you my body before I give you my words because I care so much more about my words than I do my body." That is pretty much a less-fancy summation of this piece, which is cute! I think that you should worry less about trusting people and more about enjoying life, whether people stay or go, whether happiness is waxing or waning. We only get one life, and it is worth all the changes we incur or it wouldn't be worth it at all. <3

    5/5
    Much love,
    IdTakeABulletForYou

    • 1 year ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      We should.. but its something i hold close to me. :( Its the only thing i feel i have full control over sometimes..

    • 1 year ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      We should.. but its something i hold close to me. :( Its the only thing i feel i have full control over sometimes..

    • 1 year ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      We should.. but its something i hold close to me. :( Its the only thing i feel i have full control over sometimes..

    • 1 year ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      We should.. but its something i hold close to me. :( Its the only thing i feel i have full control over sometimes..

    • 1 year ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      We should.. but its something i hold close to me. :( Its the only thing i feel i have full control over sometimes..

  • 1 year ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Holy crap, comment overload! 😂

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Oh ffs N why did you have to write this now when I'm out of votes??? Damn you woman lol.

    Love, love, love it. Trust can be given so easily but once its broken there is no going back.

    My boobs are my best asset
    My trust my worst
    Because when I trust someone
    It's my heart that hurts
    ^^
    Had to laugh at this part because its so me.. Men look at them as if they're my eyes usually and then expect me to trust them. Yeah, ok!! Loved the rhyming. Felt myself nodding all the way through!

    Em

    • 1 year ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Em..
      i read that way wrong! I didnt know we could use all our votes? I've voted on like 100 of S's poems in the last 24 hours ! he can tell you!

      And men always look at boobs then expect trust.. :P
      Its a man thing. Glad you liked it and it made you laugh :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Maher

    *coughs*

    As a man, I can definitely say, that boobs are good. If they're out there, can't blame us for looking :p We have 2 brains and guess which one activates in the presence of boobs :p

    But jokes aside dudette, this is a good write. Flows well, has humour and is true to its word :)

    • 1 year ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks M.. and i do know where mens eyes wander. It was to add a bit of humour..