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by Judy Sullivan Jun 23, 2016
Special events /
May your birthday be of joyful celebrations
along with a toast to out do all occasions.
With age and beauty thy do possess,
continuing another year with all happiness,
Tis another holiday we cannot forget,
St. Patrick's day is upon us yet.
With the luck of the Irish within our souls,
I've learned from you Mother Dear to set my goals
To enjoy what life has given me,
I'm sure glad your my Mother,
and I'll love you through eternity...
by Ben Pickard
What a well rhymed little piece of poetry and a lovely dedication from you here; well done.
Quick point: "I'm sure glad your my mother" should be "you're" (a contraction of 'you are')
Take care and all the very best
by Judy Sullivan
Thanks Ben for the correction. I really appreciate any help. Is there someway to edit it? Just a question, I noticed the #after your name, is that how many poems you've written & then what's the F-P-C-D- stand for?