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I like this. Very strong begining and ending.
We do need people to stop being deceiving. Why cant everyone just tell the truth. Good work sc
Exactly USB, exactly. Thanks :)
Maher, the imagery and rhyming fit perfectly here and make the piece flow very smoothly.
Not sure on the meaning of this but feel it could be quite a personal piece for you.
Great nonetheless, Em
Thank you ma'am
It's mainly about distractions when you're trying to focus on something. That annoying feeling you get when your train of thought stops :)
Very strong write. Loved the entire nature of this, well done.
Thank you, ma'am :)
by Ben Pickard
This really is an exquisite little piece of rhyming poetry, which I am always a sucker for anyway!
Well done on a delicate write that is a joy to read.
All the very best, good man.
Thank you Sir :)