This was one of the pieces I've submitted for my final portfolio for a writing class. The final portfolio was a website I made that consisted of images (that included the poem), this is that image: http://i.imgur.com/9iSme86.png
The nature tones within this elegant piece is just the right touch of romance. Using months within a poem is very significant of the mood setting and I always have loved this angle when used in poetry.
The play on words is very delightful and the end... just grabbed my heart!
1 year ago
by Dean Kuch
Nicely done, Senryu, very emotively expressed free verse.
As I frequently try to tell those who criticize me for writing of darkness quite often, life has not promised anyone that ours will be a rose garden, nor is all that glitters always gold.
Into EVERY life a little rain must fall, for it is water that gives our lives sustenance...