Comments : On Warmth

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    I just fainted .....

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    This is perfect, that is all!

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Such a lovely write-congratulations on your win!

  • 1 year ago

    by DarkLight

    Amazing write. It sure deserve the win. Congratulations on you win.

    Other than being impressed with the way you worded this piece,
    Your hardwork with the project does show you are on the right track and I believe you will make it to the success limits.

  • 1 year ago

    by Precious Velasco

    The perfect melancholic way of making a poetry, you got it. :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Dean Kuch

    Nicely done, Senryu, very emotively expressed free verse.
    As I frequently try to tell those who criticize me for writing of darkness quite often, life has not promised anyone that ours will be a rose garden, nor is all that glitters always gold.
    Into EVERY life a little rain must fall, for it is water that gives our lives sustenance...
    ~Dean Kuch

  • 11 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    This poem by mark is truly breathtaking.

    The nature tones within this elegant piece is just the right touch of romance. Using months within a poem is very significant of the mood setting and I always have loved this angle when used in poetry.

    The play on words is very delightful and the end... just grabbed my heart!