Comments : Space Monkey

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What an original piece of poetry with lovely, flowing rhyme.

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    As Ben said this is an original piece. it's beautifully written with great rhyming and imagery.
    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    Original and interesting.

    Space Monkey comes across as a bad, abusive Monkey. The relationship between you and he are entwined, one implicitly linked to the other.

    Could space be the deep thought, trance like affect that induces the abusive Monkey?

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Interesting write! Mr. Monkey is not very nice, is he? One typo in second life, to should be too. Other than that I really enjoyed this, flowed beautifully.