Comments : Blade (acrostic)

  • 1 year ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    This poem has some Game of Thrones feel to it. We all think our heads are secured snugly to our necks and forget so quickly how little a stroke it takes to end us just like that.
    Death is awakening, and therefore this pieces awakens.

    Wonderful write, 5/5 and nominated.
    V/r
    IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    Hello SL....good to see you posting!

    Small poems has always been my favorite....this piece is dark and yet seductive.... powerful piece!

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Welcome to p&q. I agree with S.. it has a GoT feel..
    This is a great piece. Well done ^_^

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Very cool write, I agree with Stephen, very Game of Thrones, which I love btw. The visuals were really well done.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks for reading, everyone and for your thoughts.

      SL

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Powerful stuff.

    Em

  • 11 months ago

    by Ren

    Wow.
    Such a powerful story behind such few words.
    Brilliant, as always!

    • 11 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Ren! Lovely to hear from you. I hope you are keeping well.

      All the best.