Comments : The Grove

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautiful and neat little nature piece, with wonderful scatterings of alliteration.

    SL

  • 1 year ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Nominated.

    I LOVE this write Meena. I love nature pieces at the best of times but I think this is one of my all time favourites!!! love your imagery, word use and tempo of the write EVERYTHING! it feels calming when you read it yet completely sparks my imagination to what you are eluding too....and then it makes me think of my life, my dreams and aspirations.

    This deserves a front page slot all day long,

    Wonderful.

  • 1 year ago

    by yogi73

    Hi Meena, what a lovely poem...a peaceful imagery and full of warmth. It has a timeless substance "...never to be lost...is etched for eternity."

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Such a fabulous wrote. I'd love to be in this place right now it seems so peaceful and calming and like no one would judge there.

    All the best, Em

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    This is so beautiful! I so want to be there and never leave! Everything about this just flows so smoothly...wonderful!

  • 1 year ago

    by Rania Moallem

    What a beautiful poem. Just the thought of a dream folded on a branch that one could possibly reach out is by itself fascinating and soul reviving.

    This "Grove" seems more like the field we all need to spend some time around, a place that could be in nature itself or in one's mind/heart, a source of peace and energy.

    The 2nd stanza took me to a different phase, that falls under the same mood, magical and vibrant.

    Stressing on the unbreakable bond between words and inspiration and linking between enlightenment and the well of memories is just so deep.

    An amazing poem, loved it to the last word; I could imagine everything you penned down.

    On a side note, regarding the use of "An enlighten pen speaks" - enlighten itself is a verb, you might need to replace it with a noun form, "enlightening pen, enlightener pen, enlightenment pen". Any of these could do the job.

    Thank you for your soothing poem <3

  • 1 year ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice very good imagination.
    although truth

  • 11 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    Meena has the ability to grab you with her nature poems and make you feel like you are wrapped within a silky bed of moss... like a nature poem Hammock! Just beautiful!