This poem is a perfect showpiece (for want of a better expression) of why your poetry is amazing.
I love the meter, the spacing and punctuation controls the reader perfectly walking them through the ideas and process in this piece.
I also love the directness too, often we can (especially me) have a tendency to make things complicated to try and state exactly what we mean and often , me personally, can actually OVER express which detracts from the overall msg.
I love your word choice here too...... they just slip off the tongue and as a result you rhymes flow like silk on glass, my favourite rhymer on PnQ.
"Each piece is placed with care and glee
from those who do seek desperately
to see the final picture gleam;
from innocence, we see our dreams"
^^^^^^^ this right here......GENIUS!!!
when we are uninhibited we can see the world for what it is, and put ourselves in a place where we can realise our dreams, hopes and potential.
Personally some of the rhythm here feels too forced, there's just a sense of disconnect between some of the ideas and what is actually said. However, I made sure to preface this with personally, because that could merely come from my connotations and interpretations.
I enjoy how you made this write personal and yet still so open to interpretations. The unique perspective you show here really adds a nice dimension and a clear voice that defines you as a writer (at least in my eyes) and I love pieces that are so great at capturing that.