As mentioned previously this poem is 'beautiful' and has great 'visuals'.
There is something ethereal about the night time and people who find themselves awake, we both understand this all too well. I think it's the quiet, the exclusivity of still being awake whilst the majority are asleep. There is peace and calm, but with undertones of mystery. What lies within the shadows that are cast everywhere? The fears prickle, the senses enhance and everything is possible... Here we have a lady of the night, she's dressed in green. I imagine her being mother nature, but she could just be the milk lady delivering a crate of gold top?
Sorry sir, I am feeling dizzy, dreamy...
... from her last call to the woodman, she notices the window left ajar. 'How handy' she tells herself and smiles, after all, he's been practically begging for it with all that whispering my name. Knights are all the same, wanting their (K)nightly pleasures, wanting to see my curves and no doubt get their armored hands all over 'em. I tell yer, it's more than a lady like me can take, but, there is something irresistible about Sir Lancelot, something gallant, noble and almost regal that brings the out the ardent passion in this now heaving bosom of mine. If he wants to see skin, skin, I think he will see - we shall converse in magical tongues and set the woodland a glow with synaptic connections. That'll leave him wondering in the morning I bet, he'll be like, was that a dream? He'll be left with my legendary curves etched in his mind. Poor Sir will never forget Mable the lady who put a creamy pinta on his table last night!!
The imagery in this piece is outstanding and the style is wonderful for conveying such a many meaning message. One thing I notice about this author is that every time he is nominated the piece keeps up the same flow and voice as the last read piece so beautifully that it all feels like one chapter connected to another in a story and I love how each chapter is such an interesting take on whatever has to be said. So this week the piece is beautiful, light, airy and overall mesmerizing - which is definitely worth being recognized because it is difficult to keep an audience entranced when your writing is presented in such a "blocky" or static form. This is an absolutely stunning write.